Curse

frostkisses · Mar 13, 2011, 09:14 PM // 21:14

i know its cutting out a lot of work...
but i REALLY like the cropped version you posted. intensifies it a bit and really gives focus to kimi.

Death By An Arrow · Mar 13, 2011, 09:31 PM // 21:31

I agree with frost. Have you saved it cropped already?

If you still have the larger file and choose to crop it, try and place kimi's face into the golden third (or whatever you want to call it o.O) where its the point where a horizontal and vertical third meet.. does that make sense? O.0

I think the positioning + the cropping will make it feel really dramatic and focused on Kimi. But, thats all up to IH ofcourse ;P

InfestedHydralisk · Mar 13, 2011, 09:43 PM // 21:43

It's true that the the focused part intensifies it. But the choppers and all play a huge role in the scene too. :P

But I want to use this one for future references, so people can see the entire suit and what not.

Besides, you can always make a cropped version later on.

Death By An Arrow · Mar 13, 2011, 11:08 PM // 23:08

Good point.
Hadn't thought of it being used for refrence, though this really is a good piece for that.

Eastern Magik · Mar 14, 2011, 06:00 PM // 18:00

@Frost Actually, i posted cropped version only to show off her haircut :P

@DBAA you mean, rule of the 3rds?

well, i can always crop it to make a wallpaper out of it, but the final picture will have all the elements, like the IH said, its kinda important for the story

There isn't much work left to do, so yeah, i'll post finished version tomorrow

frostkisses · Mar 15, 2011, 01:34 AM // 01:34

of course IH gets final say-just givin some feedback

*looks forward to tomorrow*

Death By An Arrow · Mar 15, 2011, 02:22 AM // 02:22

Yeah, it involves that. I read somewhere that in the corners where the two perpendicular third's lines cross is called a Golden Third (or something involving golden... Dx)

Just something i learned I wanted to pass on, just incase

-waits with frost-

Eastern Magik · Mar 15, 2011, 05:25 PM // 17:25

<3

You can see the finished version of In Utter Darkness here

next in line: FrostKisses.

Ravenhawk · Mar 15, 2011, 05:54 PM // 17:54

Looks amazing! It really does give you that MGS feeling!

Drelias Melaku · Mar 15, 2011, 10:47 PM // 22:47

O, wow, I missed a lot while I was away. It's all stunning, as always!
I think my favorite of these is Mina Rae - something about it is just so striking that I can't take my eyes off her. Wow. Just... Wow.

InfestedHydralisk · Mar 15, 2011, 11:54 PM // 23:54

This is my official original character; Kimi!

Eastern Magik · Mar 16, 2011, 11:31 AM // 11:31

Thanks Mina *hug*

@Drelias welcome back

thanks *hug*

@IH

Well, i just saw Frost's rt, and i can say this is going to be interesting, luckily its not my first time to paint horns

(you can see them here ) I'll post sketch as soon i have it done :P

Eastern Magik · Mar 16, 2011, 05:41 PM // 17:41

And sketch is done (i used some older drawings for spirits), just need to decide which horns are better:

And heres wallpaper version of Kimi:

Tommy's · Mar 16, 2011, 06:53 PM // 18:53

Scetch sure looks promising again Magik. I think you'll need to have another look at her boobs though

Concept with the 2 faces is really cool.

Invertation · Mar 16, 2011, 07:44 PM // 19:44

I'd have to say the horns angled up. However, it wouldn't be a bad idea to thicken the mid section of the horn so it transitions a bit better.

frostkisses · Mar 17, 2011, 06:19 AM // 06:19

Wasn't expecting a sketch so fast :P
I do like them better angled up as well, and maybe a bit thicker as well.
Love the pose

Eastern Magik · Mar 17, 2011, 01:02 PM // 13:02

@Tommy what about her boobs?

@Invertation yeah, will do that, thanks for the feedback

@Frost well, i used some older drawings for spirits, and since she's wearing turban, its faster to draw it than full face

Verene · Mar 17, 2011, 01:49 PM // 13:49

I think the boobs look fine, not everyone's got a huge chest after all

Tommy's · Mar 17, 2011, 03:02 PM // 15:02

Its not about the size. Its that I have the feeling that her right boob is being pushed up, while the other is not. I would push her left boob a bit more upwards. If you look at the middle of her bikinithing, the boobs are very close to eachother like if they are being pushed towards eachother. However the side of her left boobs and the bottom of it look like it gets more free space. Looks a bit unbalanced to me.

Eastern Magik · Mar 17, 2011, 04:26 PM // 16:26

omg, you are right :O i have no excuse except maybe lack of color lol, thanks for the feedback Tommy

is it better now?